Just reread Bedlam so I could be fresh reading Artifice and it feels like some shadow editing occured from the first time I read it until now?
Specifically, I could have sworn that there was a chapter, or section from Jenn's POV explaining more about why she was with the Admiral and ambassador, and also hinted why she ran out to the shuttle as Greye was leaving.
And all of that seems to be gone now? Am I imagining things or did that get retconned?
Okay, that makes more sense. I read so many books, and it took a while for this 2nd book to come out and I obviously transposed something from another book to yours, because to your point, having other POVs kind of defeats the purpose of 1st person unless used very sparingly.
Part of the reason I asked is I've run into re-releases on Amazon where changes were made. It's usually discussed, but sometimes not, so I was checking to see if I was imagining things. Obviously I was.
Really enjoying book 2 so far, although I got to say, you really like beating up on poor Greye. Not a complaint, just wow, and I thought book 1 was bad! It does create a great way for him to deeply appreciate the gifts he's being given, just a brutal way to drive home not taking anything for granted.
Keep up the good work!